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  1. Jim

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    I put this website together yesterday, almost all the photos apart the 2 of the kites were taken yesterday, so it was a busy day. The weather was on and off all day for picture taking but better pictures will be taken when I have a combination of vans on site with a bit of nice weather. Please give the site the once over and point out the typos and grammatical errors that are bound to be present:Smile: Thanks

    The sites is officially open on Tuesday the 17th May

    We are in a very rural backwater, miles away from most of you, so while we are not expecting many more than a few dozen visitors a year, we will be disappointed if you visit West Wales and don't call in:Smile: (JJ is asleep on site right now!)

    Red Kite Camping - Llanwenog
     
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    now thats a big improvement on the last time I looked yesterday works with ie
     
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    Spying on me eh?:BigGrin:
     
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    Hi Jim

    Excellent web site cant see any typo or spelling mistakes but having said that dont read welsh so dont know about that. :thumb:

    If we ever get down your way we will certainly call in.

    Mick & Sheila
     
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    JJ had a post saying he was there Jim it looks lovely you are very lucky to live there:thumb:
     
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    Hi Jim looks very nice :thumb:
    typo on intro page camping--so we almost always have very eggs for sale.
    Should it read--- very fresh eggs for sale :thumb:
    terry
     
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    Looks superb Jim,, hope fully we will pay you a visit.. :thumb:

    Dunno about typing errors !!!!

    Words left out maybe !!! :Wink:


    (Quote from your write up) At the bottom of the field there are also some free range Light Sussex chickens, so we almost always have very eggs for sale.


    Or is very eggs a kind of Welsh egg.. :RollEyes: You did ask.. :Doh:
     
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    You beat me to it by 2 mins.. :Rofl1:
     
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    Looks good:thumb:

    I like the distance to local places, many forget that so good, any, and I guess not, public transport nearby?

    Just a thought about pitches, is it worth mentioning sizes, ie for large MHs, and access for larger MHs?
     
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    yes i was about to say that also,

    Another phrase
    The Site is owned by Jim and Sian who live on the site about half way down the hill in the farmhouse.


    perhaps remove "the" site, just an idea

    Kath

    ps I thought JJ was at the kite feeding centre ...thought he got lost on his way to you :Rofl1::Rofl1::Rofl1:
     
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    Looks good to us Jim-I spent 10 mins trying to think whether LLAN could be 'phoneticised' in another way and gave up-well done :thumb:

    Cheers from CLAN-TRISS-ANT Mike.
     
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    Nice site, Jim!
    Clean-cut and simple, which is exactly what you want from a camping website. Tells you what you need to know and doesn't have any of the confusing clutter normally associated with camping websites!

    Well done! I will link you up to our new ones.....if i ever quit yapping on here for five minutes and get them finished!:Blush:

    Hope you get the bookings pouring in! Might even pop round and have an ebb - ooh! that was cornish! - as I have a few business meetings in Wales and Telford to attend.
     
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    Sian hates the "clan" phonetic, she says its not Clan its LLan:BigGrin:
     
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    I agree, but then we are both blessed by being welsh.
    Perhaps you need a disclaimer stating it the nearest an english tongue will probably get.

    Incidentally, think that 'eggs a plenty' should be 'eggs aplenty' as it a postpositive adverb.

    hehe that should stir something.

    Peter

    Ps see you soon, save me a dry patch in Carmarthen please.
     
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    You guys are a hard bunch to please!:BigGrin:

    One thing I would suggest with the eggs, when we stayed on a site recently, they had a welcome pack of 4 eggs, little jar of the homemade marmalade and the info pack (wifi passwords etc)

    It did end up in us buying more eggs (even though we had plenty on board) etc - might be worth looking into!
     
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    £5 A NIGHT and free eggs and marmalade -God RC you drive a hard bargain :Rofl1::Doh:
    terry
     
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    Need to find some time out of our busy schedule to get over to spend a few days at the site, just the sort of place we would love.

    Having looked over the website, possible spelling mistake on the 'How to Find Us' section:

    This is a live Google map so please use it, zoom in and out, as well as plane your route to us. Safe Journey.

    Sorry if we are being picky.

    Nigel and Pamala
     
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    Loss leader they call it! Promotes sales of further eggs/goods from the site, which means better profits...even if the fees went up a little, it would still be cheap for the facilities and views you have!
     
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    Fees go UP !!!! Jim stands to start making a profit in a few hundred years:Rofl1:
     
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    Site looks fantastic. Will definitely plan a visit if we get down to Wales. :thumb:


    Just a very minor comment on the how to find us section. Would it not be better to say that the Goggle map is "interactive" rather that "live" (or did I just spot you in the field :Wink:).
     
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